what is left mostly concerns the format and character treatment and other theoretically non-plot stuff that i think is very important to a project like this. dc just mentioned (not for the first time) that their kids comics are "loss leaders" that never turn a profit. since i doubt very much that every single one of those comics is bad, i think the format and venue need to looked into.
anyway, in all its "glory":
ps: did a bunch of other art while in the "pitch" mood that didn't make it into the pitch, here's one: